Crit Feedback

The design is minimal in order for the spotlight to be on the DJ’s. Is the cover too plain, if so how can it be improved?

-       Make the text fill the page?

-       Could add graphics (headphones)

-       Use photography or logos

-       The cover us quite boring at the moment, I would personally switch the cover with the first page so just he logo is on the cover and the text is the first thing you see when you open it, continue the red onto the back and make the last page the information about the project.

-       I like the cover and fits the minimalist tones of the festival branding, just needs to be high quality print.

How can I make text pages more interesting?

-       You could look at layering images under the text for some of the page

-       Incorporate main text pages with full colour – this might be interesting and will keep its simplicity and be consistent.

-       Combine imagery with the text so text pages aren’t too heavy and people stay engaged.

Is perfect stich a good choice?

-       Yes, think it will work well clean and simple

-       Yes, complementary to the design inside

-       Yes, as it seems like a modern publication

-       It will give it a professional magazine look